Indra : Congratulations Putra! You are a great shooter.
Putra : Thank you.
Indra : Can I ask you few questions?
Putra : Sure can.
Indra : When is your birthday?
Putra : My birthday was on the 11th of June 2003.Indra : Okay. What is your favourite sport?
Putra : My favourite sport is "Softball".
Indra : Softball? Great!! But I heard that recently you went for shooting. What is your feeling after you shoot?
Putra : I'm very happy and excited!
Indra : May I know what is the type of pistol that you used for shooting?
Putra : The name of the pistol is Glock.
Indra : Who is your shooting instructor?
Putra : The name of my shooting instructor is Encik Ashraf. He is a very good instructor. He provided me some trainings before I start shooting.
Indra : Cool, I'm glad to hear that. My next question, is there any technical aspect that you need to know before you shoot?Putra : Yes. The most important thing in shooting is to have the right body posture. First, we must stand straight. Put your feet apart comfortably. Lean forward, your hands hold the pistol neatly and both of your arms pointing straight to the target.(Putra stand up and show me the right posture). Make sure your eyes are on the yellow target.
Indra : Wow! It required personal coaching even on the way we stand. I personally want to learn on the right standing posture for shooting. Does it need you to be tough?
Putra : No. You do not need physical toughness. Just the right way of standing and the right way of holding the gun.
Indra : Before you shoot, do you have to go for fitness training?
Putra : I just do some spot running and stretching.
Indra : Good. You are already familiarise yourself with this shooting activity. Even though it was your first time shooting.
Putra : Yes!
Indra : What is your shooting technique?
Putra : The target is a yellow dot on a board. First, aim the white dot on the Glock to the yellow dot on the board. Then, make sure the white dot align with the tiny square on the Glock. Aim weapon at eye level, flex our arms, lean forward, stand straight and feet in natural position.
Indra : Wow! It is a lot. I wish I were there. Cool. So the next question is what are the shooting equipments?Putra : The shooting equipments are the magazine, five bullets and a Glock pistol.
Indra : Okay! How long is the bullet?
Putra : They used the 9mm bullet.
Indra : Didn't you feel afraid?Putra : Yes I was afraid, but I did have a little bit of courage to fire the weapon.
Indra : It's okay. The most important is you succeeded in passing the challenge. Next question is are you confident to do it again next time?
Putra : Yes! I'm very confident
Indra : That is good. If you want to go there again, who will you be in contact with?
Putra : I will contact my instructor Encik Ashraf.
Indra : What is the attire for shooting?
Putra : I wear a pair of shoes, a t-shirt, a pair of jeans, a headset to protect my ears and a pair of glasses.Indra : Where is the venue?
Putra : The venue is at Bukit Jugra.
Indra : Okay, how much is the fees to pay for this activity?
Putra : It's only RM 500 per person.
Indra : What do you think about this experience?
Putra : I think I will never forget this experience.
Indra : That is so nice. Congratulation again to you and thank you for spending time with me for this appointment.
Putra : You are welcome.
Indra : I am proud to hear your accomplishment of doing a very rare activity for boys like your age. You are indeed have a class of your own.
Putra : My pleasure
Indra.... you have improved a lot since "Frozen"
ReplyDeletethere are some grammar mistakes here and there .... but at your age, what i really want you to achieve is the capability to write ....
writing whatever came out from your heart and your mind...even though you are not sure whether your grammar is correct...or whether your spelling is correct ... or whether your words are the right phrase or the right words to use.... to me as long as you are able to write down whatever in your mind and your heart...that is the utmost important....
remember the writing strategies you have learnt from school....whatever you write is the first draft from you.... as a 12 years boy, personally i am impressed and proud of you...
remember that after the first draft is written.... to make you a better writer, we shall then read through your draft together and correct the grammars, the spellings and the phrase together .. so that we together can learn and make improvisation on your writing....
Congratulations Indra on your great effort for both Frozen and this Assignment... we are very proud of you... you do have class of your own :)
Dear Indra,
ReplyDeleteI am not as soft as your cikgu Iman Yasmine. If you want me to treat you and look at you as an adult, you better prove your self as one!
You are 12 years old, even though there are maybe only 10% of the other 12 years old can write like you, it means that you are the same like the other 10 millions 12 years old from 100 millions around the world.
You have made many grammar mistakes. Before, without internet, it is okay. But now, you can even google your own sentences to see whether it is the right grammar or wrong. Either you don't know or you are just plain lazy. Both are unacceptable.
To be the best, you must not be lazy to search, to find, to ask from the people around you. Don't just write. Other are looking to find your fault especially me!
If you still have time to play video games or watch television, it means that you have TIME! Use your time, finish your work properly, then only enjoy that time.
I wish you all the best and I will always be there to criticize you.